I love all the details, especially the RFID and tracker technologies. Also online the smoker as the POV makes the tension wonderful.

That was a fun trashing of the movie. I had hopes that the movie was horrible and it looks like it's right up my alley. Thank you!

That was a cute ending, the right twist with a sense of pride.

Oh, lots of players to pay attention to in this piece. Plus it points out all these groups need to learn how to up their surveillance games. :) Thank you, I'm enjoying this greatly.

Thank you. All my stories are set in the same world where the age of magic is fading and being replaced by the industrial age, so there is usually an undercurrent of magic throughout the piece. Though,

Thank you for writing this. I always find the walled garden stories to be fascinating, both looking out and looking in.

That was awesome and painfully true. Thank you.

Lovely, lovely detailed battle. I only got confused when White attacked, was it a betrayal or a trap? Thank you.

Lovely descriptions and I love the descriptions of the different tribes/groups. Though, I spent half of that chapter expecting White to get assassinated while speaking because that was very foolish thing

Thank you! I don't know why I picked Gris, I thought it just sounded like a name a creature would give itself. Originally I planned on Gris speaking to the human, but I thought it was creepier to model

Thank you! I wanted to explore my setting's version of Halloween and thought the end of winter would be closer to their day of the dead. The rest was a darker reason why someone gives out treats. :-)

Well, thank you for reading my novel. If you want to start at the beginning, check out the landing page which has all fourteen chapters and will have the edits as I find typos. Starting next week, the

I always felt our jobs was not to protect children from every cut or scrape but to let them get hurt in safe, controlled environments where they can learn and improve themselves. Like not stopping them

Thank you very much.

Thank you!

Thank you. It was just a five minute writing sprint based on a character in a novella I wrote for pride month this year called Coins for your Troubles.