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Doesn't have a bot. Welcome to unreality where what you see is not the same for me everything forms subjectively and things aren’t quite what they ought to be
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finishthestory
2019-08-07 15:41
RE: Skin Deep - Finish The Story #61
The way you pick this up is seamless, building on the anxiety in the first half, slotting little details in that bring so much. I love that the Doctor has pink skin, it somehow feels appropriate for a
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finishthestory
2019-08-07 14:22
RE: Green - Week #61 of Finish the Story
You create a such a sense of realism with how you approach the physical description of the nanites being injected, not great with needles lol, and i felt that one! I love the customization element, being
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finishthestory
2019-08-07 13:27
RE: Skin Deep- My Entry to #finishthestory Week 61
This is as captivating as Brenda, without the need for any additional concoctions! You build it so well, the comment about that voice being sexy on her, the bit about her age (the way you blend observations
calluna
finishthestory
2019-08-06 17:15
RE: Finish The Story Contest - Week #61!
Wow bris, talk about an opening that is just impossible not to go for. I could have written far too many endings for this, but ultimately, you created a character and a world too tempting to resist!
calluna
haikucontest
2019-08-05 13:08
RE: Mizu No Oto - Every Image Has Its Haiku - Edition #35 (English)
oh nooo!! Ohhh I thought i had deleted this but my connection was slow, I am so so sorry!
calluna
haikucontest
2019-08-05 11:47
RE: Mizu No Oto - Every Image Has Its Haiku - Edition #35 (English)
I did start working on entries, but totally slipped my mind. I feel like I was on the verge of something better, but I only had one finished. I wrote it as 5/7/5 and have only just noticed it doesn't count
calluna
haikucontest
2019-08-05 11:15
RE: Mizu No Oto - Every Image Has Its Haiku - Edition #35 (English)
Please can I vote for @zeleiracordero - there were some strong contenders, but this one has something evocative that stuck with me after reading it.
calluna
finishthestory
2019-08-01 15:44
RE: Finish The Story Winners - Week #60!
wooo woooo!!
calluna
finishthestory
2019-08-01 15:42
RE: Finish The Story Winners - Week #60!
Ahhhh! Thank you so much!! Had so much fun with this one <3<3 Okay, so the answers are in there, or more the details that would stop those questions arising are in there, but maybe just a bit too
calluna
finishthestory
2019-08-01 12:32
RE: X Marks The Spot (Finish The Story 60th Edition Entry!)
It took me a while to figure out a way that might, at least maybe carry the connection, hopefully the "Bryant" element kind of helped, although it may have just confused it. Awww I am so glad
calluna
finishthestory
2019-08-01 12:30
RE: X Marks The Spot (Finish The Story 60th Edition Entry!)
I tried ;) it was a fun one, thank you very much <3
calluna
finishthestory
2019-08-01 12:28
RE: X Marks The Spot (Finish The Story 60th Edition Entry!)
It's okay, it is possibly a bit holey, I had a line in there abut the time Derek had been in prison that might have been more vital than I thought hahaha but hey, good learning! It is possible to make
calluna
finishthestory
2019-08-01 12:13
RE: X Marks The Spot (Finish The Story 60th Edition Entry!)
Nope, nope, not at all lol although Derek was betrayed by Terry, Lou did steal from Derek when she got him locked up, and it is Derek's money Terry's Uncle Jon has hidden but very good to know how the
calluna
finishthestory
2019-08-01 06:03
RE: X Marks the Spot
Someone hearing voices, I am always drawn to a more internal perspective and it doesn't work this well to convey that's what's going on. Oooo interesting, I am not so into podcasts, just for lack of listening
calluna
finishthestory
2019-07-31 15:02
RE: X Marks The Spot- A Short Story For #finishthestory @bananafish
You got this out so quickly, and the action here is so complex, the way you bring all the characters together, only to separate them, and then weave their story lines for the finale. Yet you tell is so
calluna
finishthestory
2019-07-31 15:01
RE: Finish The Story Contest - Week #60!
In case i don't make it back between now and results time, please can i vote for @sarez
calluna
finishthestory
2019-07-31 14:04
RE: X Marks the Spot
Ooooo, oooooo I love it! You make this into an action packed story, spanning generations, where a blood debt is settled one way or another. You manage a lot of history here, and a really impressive amount
calluna
finishthestory
2019-07-31 13:08
RE: Damm! My uncle - Week #60 of Finish the Story
Oh my! There is something accurately sad about this, how those who are only given hard love, give it themselves, seeing themselves as better than the one who came before them, and not knowing any other
calluna
finishthestory
2019-07-31 12:51
RE: X Marks the Spot
I really enjoy this being from Mike's perspective, it's gives the story a new angle, especially the take you have on it, with the morality of each of the other characters thrown into question throughout,
calluna
finishthestory
2019-07-31 12:39
RE: X Marks the Spot
Ahhh i just love this! Under estimating the uncle, him being all the monster he was set up to be, and more, there is a real skill in how you never actually say what he did to Terry, and you don't have
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